Sian suggested that my dissatisfaction with this last piece may be remedied by correcting the tonal
quality and balance by adding a dark piece at the back and then cutting away from the front. Scary stuff but Sian reminded me that I already had a record of previous results so nothing to lose!
This is sample 6.4 as it was:
And this is the revised piece but I couldn't resist stitching the cut away pieces back on top near the cut away to add a further dimension:
These added tonal contrasts worked really well and I had fun manipulating the shape of this piece using the additional strips at the back to give an impression of rising waves:
Very pleased with this now!
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